Chapter 3...(Includes spoilers!!!)

[brooksy]

Just got done with chapter three. As usual it was awesome. Again I think it is the pacing of the book and description that I am loving so much. Don't get me wrong though I am deeply engrossed in the story itself but for me to continue reading I need just that much more, and I feel the pacing is what is doing just that. On to spoilers so don't read any further if you don't want to find out what is going to happen. Maybe the author can shed some light on this for me, there was the part where Lance was headed into the holding cell to confront the two dealers and I kind of got lost in that whole part. Did he have to sneak past a guard to get in there? If no one was there in the holding cell I kind of find that hard to picture. However this is a very very small part of the story the important part is before he sets foot in the cell and then afterward. I guess I was just wondering if you could clarify kind of how he made it that far? Great story still can't wait to see what happens in Chapter 4...

PS. How many more chapters have to go online and when do you think they will be posted?

[Kellen Lynch]

There are seventeen chapters in the draft that is being posted online, and I had been sticking to one chapter posted a week, though due to school and work and stuff, that kind of dropped off in March, but I did just post chapters seven and eight today.

[Kellen Lynch]

Also, to answer your question, no, Lance didn't have to sneak past any guards or officers or anything to get into the holding cell, which I think I touched on was even unusual to Lance. I don't want to say anything beyond this as it might spoil the story.