Post by brooksy on May 20, 2008 8:49:01 GMT -5
I would first like to respond to the previous post put in the Welcome section. Thanks for the offer to get an edited copy of the first chapter but I am to hooked into the book now and want to finish before I re-read. See earlier I talked about how much a hate to read...well...with so little practice I tend to read very slow (Please don't tease). So I really need to finish first and then I will re-read if you post the edited copies (Yes, I am enjoying the book that much). Now on to chapter two. Awesome. Again I was able to connect to the characters and the chapter again really held my interest. The side story with Ryan and Eva to me really isn't as captivating as the main story line but I am sure it will play an important part later in the book and I do relate a little bit to him (Sorry if that is a spoiler). Anyway I love the pace of the book. For me I usually lose interest in a story if I have to read to much description or I just find that things aren't happening, however, I feel this is written with just enough of everything and always leaves me excited for the next chapter. At this point I would just like to reinforce that all of this is just my opinion and I encourage all to read and judge for themselves. But I don't feel you'll be disappointed. On to chapter three... 
